Write your best Horror in 2 Sentences and Win

On The Porch

The attack came out of nowhere. Fear strangled my scream as claws raked over my skin.

Now your turn!

My inspiration came from a great meeting with my fellow SWAG (Sachse-Wylie Authors Group) members last week. So, in my last post I linked to the original Two Sentence Horror Story thread hoping to inspire my readers.

Ruth Glover ran with it, click and read her Halloween 2 Sentence Stories.

I’ve decided to go a step further.

Write and win!

The Challenge!

Submit:

Submit, in comments, your best original Horror story in 2 sentences with a link back to your website.

Vote:

Vote on your favorite!

WIN:

A $10 Amazon gift card.

Rules:

  • Submit an Original  2 sentence horror story
  • Link to your website (that’s how I’ll contact winner) and
  • Vote on someone else’s story by comment.

Winner:

One writer with the best ORIGINAL  2 Sentence Horror Story will be selected by the votes received.

Myself excluded. Get writing – and submit.

Challenge ends.

5pm Central Time October 30th, when the spooks come out!

Need more inspiration? Check out…

Two Sentence Horror Story

Autumn Walk

I tugged on his leash, pulling Harry closer. Life-like art enhanced the beauty of the park. A couple pushing a stroller, children playing ball, and a sweet older couple, walking hand-in-hand, all frozen in time. Each turn revealed another stunning piece.

A cold wind blew and dark clouds blocked the sun. An odd figure, different from the other statues of happy families stood off the main path. Harry whimpered as I ventured closer. The small placard failed to give the name of the author or donor. I read the three words aloud.

“Time to go.”

Harry barked, tugging on his leash I backed away.

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I hope you enjoyed my contribution to Julia’s Place

100 Word Challenge for Grown Ups – Week#153

If you’d like to join in the fun click on the above link.

This is the week for spooky fun.

What are you writing about?

Share!

Share your stories.

Share prompts and tips.

Leave a link to your Halloween stories, I’d love to read them.

Ghosts, goblins and witches, oh my!

 

How can you help?

What is the difference between an Alpha Reader, Beta Reader or Critique Partner?

How can you help a writer?working from home, laptop with mug by a window

Do you read a lot?

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Do you have an opinion?

Then you have a lot to offer a writer and here's how.

Writers need feedback before a manuscript is completed. A reader is invaluable to a writer and even if you’re not a writer, you have an opinion.

Readers can provide all or just some of the critique points. Also, while they will discuss some of the good things they like about the story, the goal is to have a reader you trust that’s completely honest. One who is willing to point out problems and say “hey, this does not work for me.”

The Alpha Reader

  •  An alpha reader can be anyone who enjoys reading, and doesn’t need to be a writer.
  • Alpha readers look at the big picture, help through roadblocks, and prod the writer so they can keep writing.
  • Act as a sounding board, checking for readability.
  • Lets the writer know if the first sentence, paragraph or chapter hooks them.
  • If story, main character and world is intriguing.
  • Addresses the larger elements of the story —the pacing, the tension, plot arcs, characterization, backstory, and theme.
  • Points out if the scene works; confrontation, motivation, pacing or confusing.
  • Likability of the characters and if any need to be fleshed out more.
  • Listen for the POV voice.
  • The feedback short, just enough to reassure you if the plot is on track, or to point out where the story went astray.
  • The Alpha Reader doesn’t: Give line comments, unless a single word or phrase derails a scene.

The Beta Reader looks for the same things as an Alpha Reader plus:

  •  Beta readers welds a red pen checking for all types of problems (big and small), while encouraging the writer to produce the best story possible. The beta reader looks for all the things the alpha reader does but in more detail.
  • Does line by line editing, looking for errors in spelling, grammar, characterization, and continuity.
  • Character likability and POV voice.
  • Pacing, the tension, plot arcs, characterization, backstory, and theme.
  • Ability of plot to capture and hold their attention.
  • Discuss if the end was satisfying.
  • Overall impressions of what worked and what didn’t. What they liked and didn’t.
  • A beta reader gives the same kind of detailed feedback and tips that you get from critique partners, but the beta reading just goes in one direction—they beta read for you, but you don’t necessarily beta read for them.

A Critique Partner:

  •  The critique partner (beta) reads and critiques your story, and you do the same for their WIP (not necessarily at the same time, though).
  • Critique partners give detailed feedback on not just plot and characterization, but on the craft aspects of writing—lack of conflict, violations of POV, etc.

Bottom line is you form a partnership with this person.

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A Writer

I’M A WRITER

Yes, I talk to myself.

Each day I start with a pep talk, reminding myself that I am a writer, not an aspiring (wannabe) writer, but a writer.SOURCE

However, truth be told, on certain days my conviction falters especially (popped up without warning-cliche followed by damn adverb) after receiving a rejection.

That’s when the muttering start, when my confidence wavers; so, I repeat my mantra over and over until the stain of negativity fades.

Good, bad, win or lose I keep writing because I am a writer.

 Writing Prompt

Thanks to Lillie McFerrin Writes and Five Sentence Fiction for This week’s word: CONFUSION and photo

 

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