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Last week I wrote about saying a lot with little.

That’s great; brevity is needed from time to time. But for a story to be truly beautiful, horrific or memorable, whether short or long, the writer must paint a vivid picture.

So how do we, as writers, paint a picture without adding so many color and descriptions that we end up with a muddy mess?

Anyone?

I admire writers that write with beautiful descriptions dripping from the page like diamonds around the neck of a debutante. But me, I struggle every time I sit down to write. Writing just enough words to make the sky a calm vibrant blue on a warm sunny day or adding clouds, birds, airplanes, light breeze until even I’m tired reading the paragraph. The reader does need more than, “The sky was clear.”

I’m a simple person, so I had to come up with a simple process to overcome. Kinda like any overwhelming project, I take it one piece at a time.  In art class, we were taught to block out the subject/scene at first pass. Quick and dirty get the basic dimensions down on paper. Writing is another art form. I try to apply what I learned about drawing and painting to the art of storytelling.

Here are my 2 steps:

1. Sketch and block out the story. (my version of an outline)

Like an artist sketching out a drawing in charcoal, I write the bare basics first. Just sketch out “what’s to happen.” Giving myself an idea of how many chapters it will take to reach the conclusion. 

2. I tackle each scene or chapter one at a time.

I add a layer of shading, and color to the scene, breathing life into the surroundings. Such as, what is important to the character? The sky, weather, buildings…?

Pretending I’m watching and listening to a movie, I let the scene unfold as describe what the character sees, hears, smells and touches, adding these layers of textures a little by little.

Then I go to the next scene and start the process all over again.

How do you decide to add color and description when you write? All at once, as you go, or a little at a time?

Do you have any tips to help me and others with this struggle?

Need more great tips on taking your writing further?

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Is this one of your biggest issues?

Getting just right the who, where, why and what they are doing. It’s mine.Sometimes I get carried away with descriptions. Yet often, like a good perfume, a little goes a long way. A little is divine, too much, yikes. 

I’m not a visual person so describing situations or scenes is difficult for me. So I’ve invented little tricks to help myself not over think it too much. However, the downside is I end up rewriting a lot. And I do mean a lot. Sigh… I guess there really are no shortcuts.

Things that help me:

• Look up the word. The dictionary and thesaurus really can be a great source for brainstorming.
•  Have the character stop and look around. Describe what they see, smell or hear but not what they are doing.
• Write the scene like a piece of Flash Fiction. This is a good discipline in brevity. It helps me see things in a different light.
• Remind myself that my readers know what the color purple looks like. I don’t need to go crazy.
• Reading, reading and reading.

One of the best articles I’ve read lately on this subject written by RYAN LANZ. Be sure and hop over and read it for inspiration on good descriptions. Link at bottom.

I’m also now reading:

Another good resource is:

7 WAYS TO WRITE VISUALLY (WITHOUT DESCRIBING EVERYTHING) by RYAN LANZ.

Do you have any tips that can help me with writing good descriptive scenes?

Are you a visual person? Do share!

I’d love to hear from you! Click the “write me” tab or contact me on Twitter @jeancogdell, Facebook at jean.cogdell and Amazon.com, stop by and say hey! The lights are on and I’m waiting.

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