Do you need help with structure?

I do! And I’m still learning how to outline a story with a structure that doesn’t collapse at the first strong wind of criticism.

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Have you ever loved a story, but wondered why no one else did?

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Me too.

Often.

I’m a pantster. Nothing better than sitting down and letting my muse loose on the keyboard. Too bad, writing by stream of consciousness often ends, as do most streams, into a raging uncontrollable river. And where do rivers end? Into a vast ocean, that’s where.

Then after spending hours, days and sometimes months writing thousands of words, all I can do is try not to drown amid the ocean of a rambling story. So I give up and decide to fix it another day. I’ve no idea how this happened.

Does any of this sound familiar?

I’ve begun to fear; my problem may be lack of structure.

If you’re a pantster, don’t go to yelling just yet. I’m still a pantster but, I’m learning to use structure. Because I believe there’s a way to marry both the outline structure and write pantster style.

Got a story that just aggravated you almost to insanity? Nothing is working? Take it and try breaking it down into 3 simple acts and then break those acts down further.

Got an idea for a story? Start by simplifying it with 3 acts. Then one idea under each act and an idea under each one of those headings.

Here is the basic outline I’m working with.

Act I – Opening

  1.  Hook – conflict
  2. Protagonist in daily life before transformation
  3. Opportunity to change
  4. Resistance to change
  5. Point of no return
  6. Opportunity accepted

Act II – Entering the new situation

  1. Location
  2. Meeting friends, enemies, romance;
  3. Transformative experiences
  4. Problem brings them together
  5. Problem drives them apart
  6. Crisis Hits

Act III

  1. Terrible Secret Revealed

By breaking down the story little by little, I’m giving it time to grow and hoping to find more freedom and inspiration with smaller chunks.

One of my favorite books is Save the Cat Kindle Edition by Blake Snyder and although the book is primarily focused on script writing the principles can be applied to writing a story.

So tell me, do you use the 3 Act structure or a more indepth outline? 

Do you write with or without an outline?

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Do you need to make a flyer to promote your book?

Yes, you do.

Not like those littering your car windshield at Target or dropped on your front porch every weekend.

No, this is something called an Author Information Sheet, AI for short.

And not only is it important, but apparently it’s kinda expected when you go to a book fair, expo or present your book to a library or bookstore. 

Who knew?

Don’t tell me? You did! Guess as usual, I‘m the last to figure out these things. Sigh… Well, better late than never.

So what exactly is an Author Information Sheet?

It’s a pitch sheet for you and your book.

An AI sheet is a single sheet that introduces your book to the library, book fair, bookstore, or well, you get the picture. 

On this one sheet of paper, the reader knows who you are, what you look like, where and how to contact you, the name of your book, when it was released, what the cover looks like, the genre, a brief description, the cost, where to order or buy it, and some glowing reviews. 

The job of an AI is to get the attention of readers, hook them and then reel them in for the sale. 

Cool, right?

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Sounds like a handy, hardworking little devil to have around. I might just print off a few and keep them in the car. Never know when an opportunity might come knocking.

Just because I’m a self-published author doesn’t mean I don’t want to look and act any less professional than an author published by one of the big houses. No laughing out there. I’m doing my best. And printing out a few AI sheets is a good step.

It’s a simple thing and it can speak volumes to someone who wants to know about your book. This sheet can tell them about the book, you, your website and where to find all three. Pretty cool and worth a little bit of time.

Click on the following link, to find download templates you can customize for your book. Like the scouts, always be prepared. 

How to Create an Advance Information (AI) Sheet for a Self-published Book by

Okay, does anyone out there use an AI sheet? If so, do you have a better template?

Is this something you think would be useful?

Talk to me people.

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Should you care about the bestseller list?

Well, duh, yeah. Every writer wants to see their name on that list.

But, it’s not as easy as writing your best story your family has ever read. 

Each Sunday I enjoy reading the Arts Section of the newspaper. And the first page I turn to is the column where the New York Times Best Sellers are listed. I’m always looking to see who made the list. Is it one of my favorites? Is it a newcomer?

The same holds true for the Amazon.com Top 100 List. I love clicking through looking for a good read, when I have the time that is.

Have you given much thought to how a writer actually gets listed on the New York Times Best Seller List? Or The Wall Street Journal or makes the Amazon.com top 100?

Sell lots of books, make lots of $$$$ and voila! Right?

Well, that’s what I always thought. But, seems it’s not that simple after all.

My whole perspective changed after I read this article by Tim Grahl. Not my dreams of making one of these Best Seller Lists mind you, but now I’m not quite so naive. Achieving this goal is ever-changing and cloaked in secrets and mystery by the powers that be and full of intrigue almost as much as a political drama.

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The NYT closely guards their decision-making process. But apparently it is based on samples from various booksellers across the country.

The WSJ builds their best seller list based on the sales figures they get from Nielson’s BookScan. But, BookScan doesn’t track every purchase. It doesn’t track sales through big box stores like Walmart or online sales like Createspace. Bulk purchases don’t count. Even legitimate ones. Like for a book club or a classroom.

So what should you or I do?

Just keep writing and not worry about best seller lists? I think so. Because this is one of those things that is beyond our control. Kinda like the weather.

However, this is a fascinating read about how the industry works.

THE TRUTH ABOUT THE NEW YORK TIMES AND WALL STREET JOURNAL BESTSELLER LISTS by Tim Grahl

If you have any tips for achieving this monumental goal, please share!

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Some rules are made to be broken

And, it seems I break most of them most of the time.

There are two that plagues me like little devils. They pop up in my writing like annoying toddlers and no matter how many times I rearrange them into the proper order, if I turn my back they’ll break out of line. 

But, as my critique partner and anyone else who knows me will tell you, I write like I talk.  And proper is not it. Oops, broke two in one tiny paragraph. I need to get the broom and sweep up a conjunction and stranded preposition

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Conjunctions plague me as do prepositions.

Too bad I talk as I write. I think it’s more important to connect with the reader than to write every sentence grammatically correct. Now this is just my personal opinion. As I’ve mentioned many times, I’m no expert. 

Reading something that sounds stilted and phony pulls me out of the story. 

You wouldn’t ask your spouse, “Honey, what were you talking about on the phone?” No you’d be probably say something more along the lines of, “Honey, what was that about?” Nor would I.

If the word fits the scene then is it okay to break a grammar rule? 

What do y’all think? 

Do you think it’s okay to begin a sentence with a conjunction, or to end a sentence with a preposition?

As you can read in the following article written by . Many famous authors have stranded or dangled a preposition to no ill effect. 

Click and read the entire article and see if there are times when it’s okay to break a few rules.

Can you end a sentence with a preposition?

I’m curious.

Is there a grammar rule that you stumble over?

Which one?

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