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Last week I took a much needed R & R. I enjoyed fun in the sun with the love of my life, and our wonderful family. Throw in good food, great books and I could not have asked for a better time.

Which brings me to this blog.

I’m having book withdrawal.

Withdrawal isn’t the right word.

Hmm, haunted is more like it.

Yes, I’m being haunted by Go Set a Watchman.

Have you ever read a book so good the words stayed with you long after the last paragraph?

I’ve started several books since I read Go Set a Watchman by Harper Lee, but I’ve finished none. Because, not one of them measured up to the high bar set by Ms. Lee. So haunted is a good word.

If you ever doubted the importance of a good editor, and what an editor can do for a writer, this book should set those doubts to rest.

It’s my understanding that when Ms. Lee first submitted Go Set A Watchman, her editor felt the book was too raw and real for the current time. However, her editor recognized a tiny gold nugget in the novel. She asked Ms. Lee to write more about one small passage, and believe me it is small. Her editor felt the time was ripe for a champion, but it could not be a young woman. So to To Kill A Mockingbird was born.

Let me say I love Go Set A Watchman! The prose of Ms. Lee transported me back to a time and place, that for some, might be as hard to imagine as frontiers visited on a Star Trek episode.

However, for those of us who lived it, we know she revealed the truth of how people lived, thought, spoke and often treated each other. Truth is not always pretty, it does not always set us free, but without it we live a lie. I find it sad that as far as we have grown as a people, there are still some who today live, think and say things that keep them ensconced in the old South.

Don’t miss out on this wonderful book out of concern or fear for the loss of a hero. To make Atticus Finch a crusader or a villain is to short change both the character and the author. He was simply a man of his time. Flesh, blood and human filled with flaws, fears and ambition. Atticus, like so many of us strived to just get along, to just get by in the world in which he lived.

Ms. Lee pulled back the curtain and revealed there was no great and powerful Oz, only a man. With Scout we watch the Godlike awe of her father crumble and fall away to reveal a mere mortal, flesh and blood man. We feel her heartache and love as she comes of age and comes to grip with life as it is not as she wishes it was.

Ms. Lee wrote some hard truths, but unlike a lot of writers she did it in real-time, not hindsight. What a wonderful gift to us, her readers.

I hope readers will embrace this beautiful literary prose with open arms.

In Go Set A Watchman, Ms. Lee held up a mirror and revealed life as she saw it and ask the question what do you see.

I will cherish and reread this book many times. I’m sad there are not more books hidden in her attic.

From one Daughter of the South who loved Go Set A Watchman.

5 plus Star Review! 

Need inspiration to reach your goal?

Me too!

And after reading How I published Four Books in Two Years By  a New York Times and USA Today bestselling author, I have renewed hope. 

One day, maybe, just maybe, I might get a book published.
Ms. McNear has 5 helpful suggestions to help handle the intense workload involved with meeting several writing deadlines.
Her tip on knowing your characters is definitely one area I need to work on, not to mention the dreaded structure.

Her article at Women Writers, Women’s Books is a wonderful inspiration.

Now if I can just get my butt in gear and get it done.

I hope you enjoy the article as much as I did and maybe she will inspire you to reach your goal soon.

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What do your readers feel?

I have a policy. No bad reviews.

Why? Because I would no more tell a writer their book is flawed, than a new mother her baby is ugly.

And I do not plan to give a bad review today. However, I learned something very important this weekend and I wanted to share it with y’all.

I’m sure, you like myself you have an arsenal of “how to” books on writing. Books on the plotting or writing by the seat of your pants. I’ve been reading a lot about structure and plotting but this weekend I figured out something.

I figured out why some books with no structure, less than perfect grammar, without a plot to play in, is often times loved by readers.

After spending the entire weekend reading a long  fiction book, with a lot of 5 star review from Amazon readers. I discovered why some books make it when they are about as structurally sound as a beach house after a hurricane.

This book did not live up to the 5 star hype. About 70% through the book I stopped and wondered why I didn’t care for the book.

  • Story? Nope, I’ve read about abuse and survival before. Subject didn’t bother me.
  • Missing plot? No good plot thread, could see the reflector stripes leading the way.
  • Editing? No problem I could find. Well written.
  • Characters? No, they were 3D easy to picture,  but…

Then it hit me, it was the characters. The characters were not likable! They were sweet, handsome, loving, scary, nasty pick an adjective but I could not root for either of them much less the MC. I even found it hard to hate the nasty, bad guy. By the time I finished the book I was relieved to reach the end. I had no satisfied feeling, no ah ha moment, no happiness for the MC, just glad the ordeal was over.

So my take-away from all of this is the most important thing in a book or story is:

A character the reader can love or hate!

If we love a character we will forgive a bunch of faults. Just like that crazy on Aunt who ruins the holidays, but God life would be boring as hell without her.

It’s important to give our readers someone to love, or hate. But never, For the Love of God, never give the reader someone to feel ambivalent about.

Make the villain so nasty the reader needs to take a shower, the lover so hot the reader is frustrated, the damsel in distress that the reader cries for her. Tough job. Here are some links to help.

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Do you write effective dialog?

Do you like DIY (do it yourself) instructions?

Give me a step-by-step diagram and I’m good.
An email in my inbox, from Janice Hardy from Fiction University, caught my attention. It was part of a How They Do It Series.
Good conversation, and snappy dialog draws us in whether it’s in a movie or in a book. A good comeback, in one-to-one conversation, invokes an emotional response. Sometimes we laugh and sometimes we get mad but we don’t forget the comment.

Something Worth Saying: Writing Effective Dialogue

By Joyce Scarbrough, @JoyceScarbrough 
Read the 5 tips from Ms. Scarbrough. In her first tip she reminds us that dialogue isn’t how people talk in real life.
“Leave out the banalities.
Dialogue isn’t supposed to mimic real conversations. It’s supposed to make them a lot more interesting. Readers don’t want to wade through all the niceties and chit chat people normally engage in to get to the meat of the conversation.”
To read the rest of her insight and tips click on Something Worth Saying: Writing Effective Dialogue.
Practice makes perfect, or at least improvement. In the comments section write a piece (50-150 words) using just dialog to tell what’s happening.

Here’s mine:

“Waiting long?” Mitch asks, staring straight ahead, his eyes on the road.

“I wasn’t waiting.”

“Looked like waiting to me.” He lifted one eyebrow, a smirk played on his lips.

“Well, I wasn’t,” I said, trying not to sound ungrateful. “I was just deciding which way to walk when you stopped.”

“O kay.” His voice rich with sarcasm as he drew out the word. 

“Can I borrow your phone?” I changed the subject. 

Mitch handed me his mobile. “Not sure you’ll get a signal out here.”

“Shit.” I dropped the phone back on the console. He was right.

“Where to?”

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