Often I find my writing is more telling than showing so I just go with that to get the story down and then I go back and show the scene to make it more revealing to my readers.
Telling alerts the reader to something that is unimportant. Love number 3 tip… “3 – Use telling to alert the reader that the character is relatively unimportant. This is where a lot of writers get it wrong by telling too much about the main character, which makes that person seem unimportant.”
Made me wonder if he was selling Log Cabin Syrup, salvation or inviting me to have sex. Either way, with eyes dark enough to get lost in, and that cute dimple on his right cheek, I was in deep shit. My heart fluttered and my ears buzzed as his words faded into white noise. I fell hard into two deep, smoldering wells.
I have rewritten my opening paragraph more times than I like to admit. What about you?
When I begin a new project, story or the opening is the hardest part for me. If I can’t get off to the right start then nothing falls into place. And I’ve been struggling with a particular short story for days. I have the premise in my head but until I can find the right launch the thing will not get off the ground.
That’s why this article by Brian A Klems was especially helpful for me. In it he offered the seven different approaches to writing a killer opening line by writer and WD contributor Jacob M. Appel. I hope the article helps you too. Click on the link to read…
Wanted to update this morning’s blog. Thanks to Ruth Glover for checking with our local library. Sadly, they can only pull from contracted sites. Sigh… However, I do see this as a wave of the future. Fingers crossed, Amazon will lead the libraries into the e-century and very soon.
I so glad to see the library won’t be left behind now that self-published e-books is taking the world by storm.
Do you want readers to check out your self published e-book at the local library?
Congress shall make no law respecting an establishment of religion, or prohibiting the free exercise thereof; or abridging the freedom of speech, or of the press; or the right of the people peaceably to assemble, and to petition the government for a redress of grievances.
The first amendment, along with the rest of the Bill of Rights was Passed by Congress September 25, 1789. Ratified December 15, 1791.
I sincerely hope my readers will allow me a brief break from my usual topics.
I don’t write a lot about political or religious issues. Mama always said a lady should always avoid the topics of politics and religion in social situations. Facebook, Twitter and the world of blogs are about as social as it gets. However, our biggest holiday is Independence Day, so I’m making an exception and throwing caution to the wind.
The right to practice our beliefs without interference from the government was so important that at inception it was number one of the Bill of Rights. Not in the middle, not last or in a different Amendment, but at the very beginning of the First Amendment.
Writers of our Constitution could’ve chosen to make taxes the first issue (remember the Boston Tea Party), but no, they chose to prevent the establishment of a national religion. Why? What led up to this Amendment? I don’t have a crystal ball but we do have a bit of history.
1771: The State of Virginia jails 50 Baptist worshipers for preaching the Gospel contrary to the Anglican Book of Common Prayer.
1774: Eighteen Baptists are jailed in Massachusetts for refusing to pay taxes that support the Congregational church.
So in 1777: Thomas Jefferson completed his first draft of a Virginia state bill for religious freedom, which states: “No man shall be compelled to frequent or support any religious worship, place, or ministry whatsoever.” The bill later becomes the famous Virginia Ordinance for Religious Freedom.
Seems to me even back then some people wanted everyone to believe the same thing in the same way. I’m glad some wise leaders thought of a way to prevent that from happening.
Everyone likes to think an elected official will share your core beliefs. But it is not necessary that they do so to protect yours.
The Constitution prohibits our government from establishing a national religion of any type. And those elected to serve the people cannot prohibit anyone from their religion of choice. What makes our country so exceptional, flaws and all, is the United States allows people to think and believe how they please.
Although, states have established birds, seals, flags, flowers, songs and who knows what to represent said state they cannot establish a state religion.
So as we are waving our flag, watching fireworks and celebrating with family and friends, let’s remember the tolerance that makes this country great. I encourage you to open your hearts and minds to your neighbors. Let us remain the United States.
Flag of the United States of America (Photo credit: Wikipedia)
Okay, I’m done and ready to sit back and watch the fireworks with a burger and beer. Happy Fourth everybody!!
FireWorks (Photo credit: Wikipedia)
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