How to avoid confusing your readers with Jargon

Today’s letter in the A-Z Challenge J. 

J= Jargon

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Last April I did a tiny post about the definition of Jargon. Man oh man, I didn’t realize how much there was to learn about this word. Thanks to all the great writers out there, I’ve learned a lot over the past year.

One of the biggest things I’ve learned is how confused a reader can become when this is overdone.

Recently, I felt this confusion and frustration first hand. Reading a book by a UK author became more of a chore than enjoyment. 

Why? Because the book was riddled with words I didn’t understand. This required me to stop and look up the definition so that I could get the gist of what was happening. Had the author reduced some of the jargon or at least added an explanation, I might have stuck with the book. 

What I learned about writing with or without using jargon.

  • The use of jargon can confuse the reader. Use sparingly. 
  • Avoid using pretentious, showy, or fake unintelligible words that read like Gobbledygook.
  • Slang is typical of a specific area or generation and can change.
  • Don’t overdo “Cant” words such as humbug, twaddle, hogwash, or rubbish. 
    • Cant words that are supposed to sound like serious statements about important issues (such as religion or morality) but that are not honest or sincere.
  • Careful using secret languages known as Argot.
    • Argot  is a secret language used by twins, criminals, or a dialect such as Patois.
  • Only use Tech Speak when writing a tech manual.
  • Unless you are writing about computers avoid Computerese.
    • It’s Tech Speak of computer geeks.
  • Buzzword words come and go. Make sure it’s important.
  • Don’t fill your story with abbreviations. It will look like Alphabet Soup and the reader won’t understand most of it.
    • Alphabet Soup term used figuratively to describe a confusing group of letters (such as abbreviations) used to refer to various organizations, items, etc.
  • Avoid Inflated, euphemistic, official-sounding language of government—looks like alphabet soup and is known as Bureaucratese.
  • Even if writing a military thriller, go easy with Pentagonese.
    • Not everyone understands military words and phrases.
  • Avoid the use of words that go to absurd lengths to avoid offending various classes of people. PC.
    • Nope, not a computer, PC stands for Politically Correct.

Remember:

Look for better alternatives that can add meaning and persuasive power to your writing. Using words that your reader can understand will create more of an impact than filling a scene with jargon.

What do you think about the use of Jargon?

Should it be avoided completely? 

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Read below what other writers have to say on this subject.
Reducing Jargon
Jargon by Jennifer Yirinec
Jargon and Slang
How to Prune Jargon From Your Popular Writing by Theresa MacPhail
The Jargon File 

How to find a good idea for your story

Write, write and write some more.

Write about what? Everything.

Today’s letter in the A-Z Challenge I. 

I= Ideas

Everyone wants to know where writers find their ideas.

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For me, the good ideas come few and far between. They appear with a flash or spark, and if I fail to latch on to them, they are gone just as fast.

Many of my stories come from word-play or prompts. There are lots of writing prompts available and believe it or not they work.

The idea for my first children’s book, Tryouts for Ben, came about because of a comment. Kids do say the darndest things.

And the idea for my second book due out soon came about the same way. As a mother of two amazing girls, we encouraged them to be all they could be. One day I overheard my daughter, telling her daughter she could be anything she wanted.

As a result of that conversation, A Most Reluctant Princess was born.

What have I learned from y’all about finding writing ideas?

Story ideas can come from anywhere and everywhere!

  • News story
  • Daydreaming
  • Passing comment
  • Book or movie
  • Memory
  • Prayer
  • Picture, photo, or painting
  • Writing prompt
  • Contest or challenge
  • Dream
  • Sunset or breathtaking view

The list could go on and on, but the trick is to recognize an idea. Often my ideas come in tiny seedlings and requires a lot of nurturing for it to grow. 

The more you write, the more ideas you will find. 

So, you grab an idea but what comes next? 

You add a character, a place, and a theme. Then like playing with Legos, begin to build your idea into a story.

The hard part is taking this tiny idea and enlarging it to appeal to someone other than myself. Not everyone gets my sense of humor or sarcasm. So, if I want others to read what I’ve written, I must broaden the story to reach my target audience.

Remember-

There is nothing new under the sun. No new ideas. But, you can put a new spin on an old idea. Make it yours.

Where did you find your last idea?

Did that idea turn into a story?

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Want to read more on where other writers find their idea? Click the links below.

The Joy Is In the Struggle of Making: How Writers Get Their Ideas by AARON GILBREATH
Where Do You Get Your Ideas…? by Michael A. Banks
Where Do Successful Authors Get Their Most Brilliant Writing Ideas? by
WHERE DO YOU GET YOUR IDEAS? by Neil Gaiman
31 Ways to Find Inspiration for Your Writing By Leo Babauta

 

Do you know how important hooks are?

Extremely. Without hooks, the reader stops reading.

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Today’s letter in the A-Z Challenge   is H.

H= Hooks

Hooks are needed throughout the story, not just in the beginning.

Everyone knows about the Opening Hook. That first paragraph that grabs or catches the reader’s attention. Or not. This is your chance to win or lose the reader.

But, that’s just the beginning. Once you have the reader’s attention, you must keep it.

That’s the job of the hooks. Scattered throughout the story or essay, hooks persuade the reader to keep going. Always enticing them to turn the page.

So, just what have y’all taught me about Hooks?

There are several different hooks:

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(Photo credit: Wikipedia)
  • First sentence – hooks the reader to read the first paragraph.
  • First Paragraph – lures the reader deeper into the chapter.
  • Dialog – engages the reader in the conversation.
  • Scene – determines if the reader will read the next chapter.

What is a hook?

  • A first impression.
  • Something to propel the story forward.
  • An unusual detail or startling fact.
  • A strong statement or opinion.
  • An engaging question.
  • An exaggeration or outrageous statement.
  • A question that begs for an answer.
  • An anecdote that leads into a scenario.
  • Foreshadowing trouble.

Be careful!

Don’t fall into the trap of the old “bait & switch.”

The story must live up to the hook. It should capture and express what the reader can expect.

It’s no fun to be drawn into a story only to find out you’ve been misled and that the only thing interesting in the story was the hook. No one likes to be tricked.

How important do you think a hook is?

Do you think hooks should be used throughout the manuscript?

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Want to explore the intricacies of writing hooks? Then click on these links.

How to write dialogue that hooks readers: 10 tips
Writing Hooks (Not Crooks) By Kat Feete
Starting With a Hook
Writing 201: Intros and Hooks
Write Better Fiction: The Scene Hook  ~ KRISTINA STANLEY

 

Why you need a unique Gravatar

Today’s letter in the A-Z Challenge   is G.

G= Gravatar

Gravatar stands for Globally Recognized Avatar.

An Avatar is a graphical representation of you or your business. It can be a picture or icon .


 

In the early years of my blog, I used a generated random icon as my Gravatar. Until, I realized it said nothing about me or my website. 

So I created a Gravatar using my photo. It’s about time to upgrade the pic, but hopefully, I will still look like me. I hate having my picture taken. Oh well, time marches on.

A Gravatar represents you, your writing and your blog. With the right Gravatar, you become recognizable at a glance.

I confess some of the weird, or spider looking Gravatar spooked me. It’s like connecting with a masked person. I don’t care for them.

Although usually associated with WordPress, the Gravatar are now widely used and accepted across many platforms. 

Seven things I’ve learned about the Gravatar

  1. Everyone needs one.
  2. A Gravatar is your calling card or business card. It introduces you to the world.
  3. Pick one that relates to your genre, website or you. If your blog is about dogs, a dog photo might work. Of course, some readers may think it’s about a blogging dog.
  4. It should be easily recognizable. Remember this is a tiny picture or icon, choose wisely.
  5. Make sure your Gravatar has active links. Where will a reader land if they click on your image?
  6. A Gravatar helps create your branding platform. 
  7. WordPress has built-in support for Gravatar that will automatically pulls in yours and attach to your comments.

Want to set up or change your Gravatar? Easy, just go to Gravatar.com and follow the steps.

Want to read more about creating your Gravatar? Read the links below.

Do you use a computer generated Gravatar? 

What about a custom Gravatar?

Does it reflect the message you wish others to hear?

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