How to conduct an effective, revealing interview

Of a fictional character

That’s right, main, minor or your imaginary muse. You can conduct an interview and discover all sorts of stuff about them.

You can be formal and all Dragnet, “Just the facts.” Using a basic character template that fills in stuff like name, rank, eye color, height, weight, marriage status, etc.

Or you can get creative and let your freak fly free with wild questions.

This is your interview so ask away.

I’ve never seen anyone have fun with the process as much as Dan Alatorre did in a recent post. Character Interview: Samantha (Sam) From Poggibonsi.

Dan’s post got me to thinking, which by the way, is not always easy. What if I were to conduct a conversation before I sit down to write a scene? A shortened version of an interview?

Who doesn’t enjoy talking about themselves? Especially, fictional people. What better way to get a story flowing than taking a minute to ask questions?

Every writer, at some point or another, encounters a reluctant character who fails to show up for work. Why not call them and find out why they are a no-show?

 

How would that phone call go?

Phone pressed to my ear, I glanced at the clock on my desk for the umpteenth time.

“Come on, answer the damn phone EJ.” I cursed at the continued ringing in my ear. No way would I would not leave another voice mail. I hated voice mail.

“Hello.”

“God almighty EJ! You’ve got the phone upside down.” I screamed into the phone.

“That better?” Her laughter echoed through the phone. Someone had a fun night and it wasn’t me.

“Are you still in bed?”

“No, no I’m up.”

“Did you plan on showing up today?” My jaw pops, and my left I twitches as I mentally count to ten.

“Yeah, sure. What time is it?”

“Nine thirty, and I’ve been waiting since seven.” I take a deep breath, rotate my head hoping to loosen the strangling tension in my neck. “We were gonna write the next chapter this morning.”

“Sorr-ee. So I’m a little late. Keep your panties on, there’s still time to get it done.”

“What happened, one too many margaritas last night?”

“No, only a couple. But I was on a roll and stayed up till past one writing a kick ass murder…”

“Stop right there EJ.” I did not want to hear about a new project. “You promised to finish this book before you started another one.”

“God Almighty Jean, I can work on more than one project at a time.”

“No, you can’t. Mine will fall on the back burner. I know you.”

“Good grief. I’m leaving now. Hear?” EJ rattled her keys against the phone.

“Give me a hint, and I’ll start writing the next scene.”

“You know, I can’t think until I’ve had coffee. Maybe I’ll stop at Starbucks.”

“No! Get over here, I’ve got a fresh pot brewing. I can’t write without you.”

Her laughter is muffled by the car engine. “Bless your heart, you are lost without me.”

My eyes drift from the clock to the blank screen of my laptop. I hate waiting, and EJ knows it.

How would you interview your protagonist this morning?

Have you ever tried something like this?

What type of interview do you prefer? Just the facts or a more creative approach?

Below I’ve listed several great articles about different ways to interview a character. Read and enjoy.

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Four Methods For Interviewing Characters by Laurie Campell

CHARACTER SHEETS AND CHARACTER CREATION

Interviewing a Fictional Character 

How to Interview Your Character  by

Interview Your Characters  by

Interview Questions for Your Main Characters

Flesh out your fictional characters by having Redditors interview them by Lauren Davis

Artwork courtesy of Pixabay.com and Canva

 

Do you suffer from a fear of words?

Do you see your story in pictures or words?

Then you might be a visual writer.

After reading Nancy Friedman‘s post, I’m convinced. I’m a visual writer. Because I see glimpses of a story and then proceed to put the things I see into words. Not always an easy feat.

Writing pictures into words can be a problem if the writer has a fear of words.

I’m bad to write, in short, clipped sentences often failing to describe in detail what I want the reader to understand. Not good. So, I’m going to work on writing a little more prosaic.

If you ever find yourself at a loss for words? 

You might be a visual writer.

If you ever have trouble with “what comes next” in a scene?

You might be a visual writer.

If you have trouble writing specific descriptions and hope the reader “gets it?”

You might be a visual writer. (this one is so me.)

So how do I use my visual ability to convey the right words at the right time and in the right order? How do I make sure my readers can see what I see?

Practice, practice, and practice. Practice with words.

Remember readers are not psychic. They cannot see a scene unless I paint a “verbal” picture.

PS: A little trivia. Logophobia, is a fear of words, talking. Also, who knew there is a Visual Thesaurus? Cool!

Go read Nancy’s article and tell me…

Are you a visual writer or a verbal writer?

Are the right words always at your beck and call?

Or do you struggle to describe the scenes dancing in your head?

Fear of Words (and Other Writer’s Blocks) by Nancy Friedman

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How to instantly improve your story

By putting a little zing in your writing with power words.

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Now I don’t mean to burst your bubble, but I’m not promising to instantly make you a NY Times bestseller. No, that’s gonna take a whole lot more information than I possess. However, should I ever be so fortunate as to ascend to such lofty heights, I’ll be in a better position to share the climb.

But back to improving. That’s where I’m at now. Tweaking and changing and learning how to better grab my readers. To that end, I’ve found a couple of terrific posts.

Use Power Words to Spice Up Every Page of Your Book or Website  by Judy Cullins

317 Power Words That’ll Instantly Make You a Better Writer  by Jon Morrow

In these articles, they write about using powerful, thought-provoking words that will not only grab but also hold the attention of a reader. Both Ms. Cullins and Mr. Morrow also provide an extensive list of “power words” that help us get started.

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Use the right one!

What did I glean from their posts?

  • Words have power but use the right ones.
  • Smart speakers, as well as writers, sprinkle power words without drawing attention to them.
  • Power words invoke emotion.
  • A story will be bland and dull without a few power words.
  • Not all power words are the same. Some invoke passion, others greed, fear, joy, or create comfort and curiosity.

Here is today’s challenge.

Check one of your favorite books, are power words used in the first paragraph?

Look at your current WIP, do you have power words to grab a reader?

Will adding a power word or two make the paragraph better?

What do you think?

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Are you forgetful? Do you need a list?

A shopping list? A to-do list? Christmas list? Repair list?

Me? Oh yes! I’m lost without a list for everything. I’ve lists on my phone, on the fridge, on my desk, and in my computer.

I can hear you. Yes, they overlap but how else will I have the list when I need it.

But I’d never thought about making lists for my story or for my characters!

What a wonderful idea.

Not only have I divided it up into sections but also made lists for my characters and scenes.

I even made my protagonist an anal list maker. How fun. 

My manuscript now has lists (steps) that the characters must complete in each scene.

Okay, I heard you. Yes, it’s a lot like scene goals, but I’m breaking it down a little further. For me it’s working to break through a bit of stalled writers slow down, I’ve had lately.

Click and Read Janes post –

How Lists Inform Our Writing, Our World 

Tell me have you ever made “lists” for a scene or character to fulfill? 

What do you think of my list idea?

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