The opening line, the opening paragraph, the opening chapter.
That’s what I struggle with, the opening. Sometimes I write and rewrite it so many times it goes from bad to worse. But I don’t give up.
I’m striving for opening words that will entice and seduce the reader. In other words, the opening must “kick ass” to keep the reader’s attention.
Kick who? What?
How many times have you started a conversation with a friend that went something like, “Wait until you hear this,” or “You aren’t going to believe what so-in-so did,” or maybe “Oh my God, listen to what just happened.”
Your friend probably held their breath as they waited for the rest of the salacious story.
That’s the response I want when I start a story.
So, what’s the best way to start your story?
Only you can answer that question, but whatever you decide, remember it’s an invitation to the reader.
But we need to promise to tell the kind of lies the reader wants to hear and then make good on that promise.
The opening lets the reader willingly suspend their disbelief for a little while and step into the surreal.
Here are some ways to hook your reader with a killer first line.
- Begin with something unexpected. (The suggestions here are endless.)
- Start with action that catapults the story. (Everyone loves a good car chase, death scene or explosion.)
- Use a simile or metaphor. (You could get real spooky with this one.)
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What do you look for in a first line?
Do you have a special technique for beginning a story?