I’ve been reading a lot about how to show what my characters are feeling.
Putting emotions on paper, in words that pull in a reader is not as easy as one might think. From lovers, friends, enemies, coworkers, monsters, and strangers all experience emotions and we need to show them to the reader.
Luckily, there are several good writers who know just what I need to do.
A little food for thought…
- Fear, anger, doubt, joy is universal emotions. Help your reader remember when they felt those same emotions. This enables the reader to connect with your characters.
- There are two types of emotions. Primary and Secondary.
- Primary is the first initial reaction, which is an unthinking, instinctive response. The Primary response often disappears as fast as it appeared, giving way to…
- Secondary reaction. Replacement by secondary emotions can complicate the situation, often making it difficult to understand the circumstances. For instance, fear turns to anger back to fear and then to flight.
- Don’t forget the backstory that formed your character’s emotions. The biological, psychological and social factors led them to feel the way they do.
- Remember to use inciting incidents and circumstances also shape a character’s emotions.
- What is going on in the story to reinforce a character’s response?
- What protective trait does the character have that will bring them to the other side and hopefully a good ending?
If you want to get a few great tips and examples of emotional writing, take a minute and click on these links.
The Connection between Character Emotion and Reader Empathy  in Writing for Life
Primary and Secondary Emotions by Changing Minds.
7 Tips to Crafting Emotionally-Meaty Monsters by Staci Troilo Â
The 3-Act Emotional Arc For Showing Shame In Fiction by Lisa Hall-Wilson
Deepening Character Complexity with the Help of Psychology Â
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Thanks you for this post and the references you include. I strive to connect viscerally with emotional as I write. You’ve given me more to think about as I craft the scene.
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I find showing emotions is hard. Glad to know these helped.
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Showing emotions in writing is not always easy. The “show don’t tell” advise set me back a lot. Thanks for the links. I will be sure to look them up.
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Show not tell can be confusing at least I find it so. Hope these articles help you too.
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On behalf of my guest poster (Charles E. Yallowitz), I’d like to thank you for including the 7 Tips for Crafting Emotionally-Meaty Monsters post.
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You are so welcome. I love sharing great writing tips.
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I do, too. With the exception of this past week (I took time off to spend with my daughter), I post industry links every Friday. I love that the writing community is so friendly and shares so much.
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I’ve been away from my computer too. Spending time abroad with grand kids. Time to get back in the saddle.
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Welcome back! That sounds lovely, but I’m sure you were sad to leave.
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It was a wonderful visit. I miss them already.
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