A reaction for every action? Large or small?
The short answer is yes. I think so.
Once I grasp this concept, things began going a little smoother. Now in each scene, I stop and ask what will the characters consequence be for each action.
Even the smallest of decisions can move a story forward. For instance, stopping to buy a coffee can result in meeting the right or wrong person. Turning left instead of right can result in an accident or a chance meeting.
See. Each decision your character makes must have a consequence sooner or later to drive the story to the end.
It’s simple cause and effect.
My current work in progress I’m using action-reaction to move each scene forward. Even the most mundane of things.
Such as…
- action: she pulled her sweater tighter
- reaction: draws unwanted attention
- action: he seeks her out
- reaction: love or hate, life or death?
This could go further and carry on in another chapter. And with a little luck, things will fall into place like a row of dominos.
Look at a scene in your WIP. Is there any action that could use a reaction? Even if it is ordinary, mundane and everyday stuff it might be what you need to fill in the gaps.
Read these great articles on consequences for our characters.
Consequences of Your Character’s Actions
Writing an Action Outline
Tell me what you think.
Do you believe there must be a reaction to every action?
Can you see this helping propel a story forward?
Got any tips how you weave action and reaction into your story?
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Hi Jean! Per your earlier permission, I scheduled this article to be featured as a guest post on http://www.ryanlanz.com on July 10th. As usual, it has your credit/bio/link. Thanks!
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Thanks Ryan!
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Slight retraction…now assigned to July 25th!
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I had never thought about this before but you are absolutely right, Jean. 😉
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Too bad it’s easier said than done. 🙂
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Reblogged this on Don Massenzio's Blog and commented:
Check out this post from Jean’s Writing blog on the need to write a consequence for every action
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Reblogged this on Kim's Author Support Blog.
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I agree each action has a consequence. I’m reading a novel that shows it. Thank you for this Jean. 🙂
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Is the novel good? Share, I love finding new books to read. 🙂
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I’d love to share it with you, but the problem is it’s one written in Urdu, by a friend of mine. 😦
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Oh yeah that would be a problem. LOL
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This excellent advice, it’s tricky to get my mind around, but I can see that it will do wonders for my writing. Thank you for sharing.
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It’s not so hard if you think about your day. The little things can add up to big changes. Sometimes I think, “Why in hell did I do…” LOL
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Great point 🙂 thank you
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Thanks Amy!
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