And how to avoid info-dumping?
FYI, I’ve been working on my latest book for the past year and boy-howdy this has been a big issue for me.
Not sure what writing with good exposition is?
It’s like beautiful painting when done right. But done wrong, turns into ugly info-dumping.
Too much information in a story all at once drives me nuts. How to weave it in so the seamlessly so that the reader absorbs the information without distraction, now that takes a little talent and a lot of hard work.
So what is the difference between info-dumping and good exposition?
Bridget over at Now Novel (link below) just wrote a terrific blog post that gives us examples to live by. And for me, this couldn’t come at a better time. I just finished ripping about a thousand words from my WIP because it contained too much info.
What did I learn about writing “good exposition” from this post?
- With dialog, make it realistic.
- Remember how people have conversations. No one dumps their family history all at once when they meet a stranger.
- Use to set up the history of a place.
- I can use a characters’ present and their past or even future, to flesh out historical details of their lives. But it’s important to merge the description with the scene settings.
- Write descriptions with rich atmosphere.
- use personification of objects to enhance. Give an inanimate object human-like character to show your setting’s atmosphere with a metaphor or an analogy. What’s the difference between metaphor and analogy?
- A character’s personality.
- Peppering a scene showing glimpses of a character’s personality, development, fears, loves, hopes, etc. can make the character 3D.
- Open by describing puzzling, dramatic events before the novel begins.
- Sowing curiosity, in the beginning, can develop a reader’s desire to search for an answer.
This is just a glimpse at the information Now Novel shares about avoiding info-dumping and writing with good exposition.
To read the entire post click on this link.
Good exposition examples: Narrating your story’s background
My tip…
- Read, read and read some more. Read good books, bad books, newspapers and magazine articles. Because unlike TV, and movies these venues must engage the customer with words. Fake news is a good example. These writers paint such a vivid picture readers fall for the story.
Did it help you understand how to avoid info-dumping?
Do you have any tips to share that will help me write better descriptive scenes?
Tell me, how you insert information.
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I love to slip little histories in between two characters who are having a conversation. e.g. “Behave or I’ll tell her about the time I dressed you as a girl.” Laurence held his hands up. “I’ll behave, promise.” Fianna laughed. “Blue was so not your color.”
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Very good. Love how you did that so seamless.
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Thank you, Jean 🙂
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Reblogged this on Don Massenzio's Blog and commented:
Check out this helpful post from Jean’s Writing blog on how to write good exposition background.
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Getting the balance right is so tricky. I’m with you, Jean, on simply reading and reading until you can spot good (and bad) practice. Thanks for another helpful & enjoyable post.
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Thanks Sara. I learn something new with every book I read, or so it seems.
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Good post Jean. This is what I love about writing- there are so many moving parts to account for and so many threads to weave in the tapestry. Would you say that info dumping is related to “show don’t tell”?
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It can be, but sometimes I think “info dumping” is just a bunch of useless stuff the reader soon forgets.
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hmmm- sometimes it may be useful, but many times the author is inserting back story or descriptions that may be important for the reader to know- but the author isn’t weaving it organically into the story- just dumping a jarring paragraph. Like I said, I love learning all of this!
Thanks for you posting your feedback
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Thanks Jena!
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I’m reading a book, it’s in a different language, while the writer has a style of her own, she tends to write in too much detail. It has been a long time since I started it, it seems it’s a never ending story. The book is in seven parts, each part is too long. I’m not sure she’ll appreciate if I tell her to cut some things that are not necessary. I’m supposed to write a review of this novel, when I’m done. I wish you could help me in this. 🙂
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If the author ask for a review, be honest and kind. That’s the best a reader can do. If the author ask for you to be a beta/edit reader, again be kind but helpful. That’s the best advice I can give you.
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Thank you,
She did ask for my advice. I was careful not to hurt her feelings, I wrote everything positive and also very gently asked her if some of it could be shortened.
She said she appreciates my comment, so I’ve crossed this hurdle. 🙂
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I love the sandwich method. Lots of bread (good stuff) a little filling (critique) in the middle. 🙂 Sounds like you did great.
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I too am in the hate-it-but-do-it club. Thanks for an excellent, informative post!
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I think we all are. LOL
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I hate info dumping! It’s my number 1 pet peeve.
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