The breeze wrapped around me like a warm blanket, but gave me little comfort. A shadow darkened the sun, and my face was covered in shadow as a cloud blocked the sun. I stared at the sky and wished I could fly. High above the trees into the clouds away from here and him. I closed my eyes and imagined the grass a magic carpet that would lift me up to parts unknown. To a place free of heartbreak and sadness. Somewhere my soul would feel joy again. Somewhere no clouds would ever darken the blue sky again.
This was my contribution to The Prompt #74 Blue
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Good site you have got here.. It’s hard to find excellent
writing like yours these days. I truly appreciate people like
you! Take care!!
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You are so kind!
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It’s also important to examine your trees after having a massive hurricane or many days of heavy
rainfall (like we have had in Atlanta currently).
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Lovely poem, Jean. I was thinking of the song by Judy Garland, “Somewhere Over the Rainbow.” She idealizes the place, but finds there’s trouble there also. It’s great to dream though. 🙂
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Always.
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Well written. I enjoyed reading.
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I’m so glad you enjoyed my little piece!
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Suzanne that is one of the nicest compliments you could have given me. Thank you.
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Well written and beautiful. Great job Jean.
Cheers.
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Thank you Ed, encouragement like yours keeps me going.
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Thank you Jean! Loved it!
I hope you accept this: https://hsampson.wordpress.com/2015/07/17/the-sunshine-award/
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You are so kind! Thank you!
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