The phone rang. I glanced at the caller ID and answered worry clouding my mind. No one or nothing could’ve prepared me for the sound of your voice nor the anger and hurt spilling forth. My heart shattered into a thousand pieces as I stood unmoving, letting the words pierce my soul. Some say time heals; I hope they’re right.
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| (Photo credit: Horia Varlan) |
It’s been awhile, hope you enjoy my contribution to Lillie McFerrin’s
Five Sentence Fiction – Pieces
If you’d like to take a stab at a great writing exercise, click on her link and join in the fun.
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Jean's Writing 
I could feel the shivers and pain gushing through me as I read your piece.
Nicely done.
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Thank you so much for your nice comment. Input is important to me.
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Enjoyable and I kinda know that feeling, too!
Scott
Mine: http://kindredspirit23.wordpress.com/2013/11/22/fsf-five-sentence-fiction-the-last-straw-pieces-11222013-rated-pg/
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Glad you like this one, and thanks for stopping by.
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